Continuing on with the writing exercises, here is another attempt to use no adverbs or adjectives. The style of this one is very, very different than the other two, but maintains that maxim of not using modifying words EXCEPT nouns or verbs.
If you feel like trying something like this, give it a shot! You can post here in my comments, or on your own blog and let me know about your post! I’d love to see your work.
Buzzing, whining, annoying. Swatting, missing, distracted. Stinging, pinching, shouting, frustration and anger. Slapping, chasing, lost in the dark.
Swirling, dizzying … staggering … hand on forehead … confusion … .
Falling … panting … gasping … vision blurring … .
Numb … cold, shivering … darkness … fading, fading … .