A Jog in the Park

2009 July 1

By now, my dad knows I’m missing.

I don’t know where I am.  I’m lying in sand.  I was running, running through a park.  Someone came up behind me — I thought it was another runner — and then a sharp pain, on the back of my head.  Blackness, shot through with stars, then a binding over my wrists.  Something over my mouth next.

Pain.  A lot of pain.

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Do Not Enter, Part 5

2009 March 5
by DarcKnyt

The end of the story.  If you’re interested in seeing it from the beginning, you can do so from this page.

Thanks for following along, everyone!

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A hot wash of air rushed up from behind Rose.

It raised the hair on her arms and neck and a shudder wracked her body.  She heard her breath, thready and whimpering, rasp in the tight confines.  She felt the air heat, a layer of gleaming, slick sweat caked her skin.  She turned her head, slow, her eyes searching in the dark for the eerie dances of light.

The door stood black against the bright, hot edge of orange and yellow which danced on the wall, and from the crack between the door and jamb.

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Do Not Enter, Part 4

2009 March 4
by DarcKnyt

The kiriban prize for one of my faithful and very kind watchers on my deviantART page continues.

Enjoy, everyone.  I think – think – only one more after this.

If you’re interested you can see the whole thing here.

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Rose shook, her eyes darted across the battered pavement.

Nothing.  Utter solitude.

She heard a rasping breath, and her heart spiked.  She yelped and looked over her shoulder, but only the dark square of the building against the bright midday sky stared down on her.  She panted and realized the rasping breath was hers.

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Do Not Enter, Part 3

2009 March 2

Here’s another installment of the “Do Not Enter” story, a kiriban prize for one of the terrific watchers on my deviantART page.

I hope you enjoy it.  If you want to catch the whole thing, you can do so here.

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Rose scrabbled up the stone steps on her hands and knees. She tore her weight forward, ripped skin and broke fingernails to the quick. Her rasping breath dragged gulps of dust, dirt, grime. She felt tiny stones stab the soft flesh of her knees and palms. The top of the dark stairwell seemed so far away and her frantic efforts didn’t seem to close the distance.

She exploded through the opening and pulled herself away from it across the splintery subfloor. Daggers of ancient wood sank deep in her hands. She flipped onto her back and skittered away until she slipped and crashed down on the back of her head in the middle of the room.

A new wave of dust puffed motes drifted and glinted in the white, soft daylight. She heaved and panted, stared.

The hole sat innocent, innocuous. A hole in the floor; nothing more.

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Do Not Enter, Part 2

2009 February 17

Continuation of “Do Not Enter”, which you can find en totem here.

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Rose came back into the building, the dusty haze still lingering in the sun streaming through the windows.  She held a tiny, silver flashlight from her car’s glove box in one hand, her purse slung over the other.  She pointed the flashlight at her face and clicked the button.  A strong white beam stabbed her eyes.  She snapped it off, blinked the blue-white spot out of her vision, and moved toward the staircase shaft to the grinding sound of grit on the rough floorboard planks.  The thump of her soles on the age-hardened wood seemed deafening.

She set her purse down next to her, and stared at the staircase shaft.

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Do Not Enter, Part 1

2009 February 16

So begins a kiriban prize someone won over on my deviantART page.  She captured my 21,000th page view.  This is her prize.

As usual, I used the winner as the main character.  I’ve been moving this along at a steady pace now all weekend.  I started on Friday night.  At this point it’s about 4,100 words long, broken into three scenes, but it’s not over yet.

Anyway, enjoy, everyone.

You’ll be able to catch the whole thing over here as it progresses, if you’re interested.

God bless,
-JDT-

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Rose set her hands on her hips, jolted her whole body and huffed an exasperated breath.  “So … what do we do?”  Her eyes stared into the dark hole in front of her.

Butch stood beside her and fiddled with his Ray-Bans.  “Um … nothing, Rose.  There’s nothing we can do.  That’s why I called you — if we could do something, I’d do it.”

Rose turned to speak but her mouth hung agape for a moment before she snapped it shut.  Butch shrugged.

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Field Trip

2009 February 10

The train station platform thronged with people, all of them jiggling and jostling along under the warm, yellow lights. They gleamed like sunshine from skin, coats, hats, scarves, luggage. The murmur clamored to an unintelligible crescendo as tones, voices and conversations of so many, swirled in an audile wave and washed over the human beach. Hands rose into the bright illumination over the heads, necks craned and faces lifted on tip-toes to find family members, loved ones, friends.

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Misty Hollow

2009 January 31

There’s a fog-stuffed path near my house, where all you can see is the ghosts of tree trunks and dense underbrush, the brambles and thorn bushes, the thickets packed with bird nests and slimy things.  The mist swirls like stagnant smoke and the trees make an umbrella over it, shield it from the greedy sun trying to burn it off and expose the path of pine needles and dead leaves and soft, muffling peat.  That path is at the edge of a flat where my great-great granddaddy built the house.  He flattened out and cleared an area where trees weren’t too dense, where the hillside wasn’t too deep and where he’d have a view of the leaves changing in fall time.  Off the front porch and down the rough-hewn half-log steps, down the gravel-coated walk and to the left you go, and there, between the trunks of two mighty trees, older than our country maybe, older than anyone can remember, the path sort of sneaks up and drops down a slope into the mist.

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The Strange Case of Benny Rogers, Pt. 9 (End)

2008 December 18

Yes, folks, sad as it is, this is it.  I want to thank all of you for your patience while I struggled to get this written and completed.

Thanks to my friends for being such good sports and letting me take so much liberty with their “characters”.  The people depicted are nothing like the people upon which they are based.

Hope you enjoy.  Thanks for following along.

If you need to start at the beginning, it’s here.

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I don’t wanna look up, don’t wanna see, don’t wanna know … but I sit up anyway, like an asshole, and get a good gander at it.

There it is, at the end of the alley, heaving its body up and down.  Then it charges like a bull.  Right at the car.

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The Strange Case of Benny Rogers, Pt. 8

2008 December 9

Okay, so … I sorta forgot I had this, see. And, while that may not seem like a big deal to most of you, I had a friend nag me until I posted it.

In reality, I wrote this right after I wrote part 7; I just forgot to post it. And then I forgot it was there. So anyway — here it is.

And what about an ending? Anyone have any ideas? Love to hear ‘em.

And if you want to read the whole thing, you can start at the beginning.

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I’m pretty sure I hear Beattie shit himself … I know I did. He steps back so fast the light’s wiggling all over the place. Tower slaps her hand over her mouth to hold in a scream, but she keeps her gun up and she’s moving sideways toward Beattie.

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